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It's War!

It's war, when the father gets up in his holidays by 5 clock.
         When he enters his service for the family like everyone else.
         When he just attacks the pool-landscape of the Normadie.
         When he raised his flag to mark his capture area.
         He and 500 others.

It's war, when she attacks the discounts.
         When she search for the armed conflict between her girlfriends.
         When she capture ressources, she didn't need.
         When she also brings scarped knees with her new summer skirt home.
         She and 500 others.

It's war, when the whole humans loose their heads.
         We and all others.
Hello friends, watchers and visitors, :iconcommentplz:

Iam trying to write some poetry about a (for me) important topic. The topic is WAR. War is a horrible thing. But whan we can talk about war?
i try to play with methaphors.

I think war is despirate because we destroy our wonderful world. I mean why conquer something, to own something? i think to share something is more powerful as to fight against somethink and to controll something. (Sorry, i see that i say all the time: something)
War is a shame because so many innocent people have to suffer and/or die. I pray for them because i see everyday that something happend in the world. This is make me really sad!

So let me say!

:bulletgreen: Let's start a WAR against WAR!

But i think we cant manage this. I think its imposseble because somewhere in the world there is a person who want power and want to reach it whatever it costs and conflicts are always there.

Here the German version:
( Es ist Krieg!
Es ist Krieg, wenn der Vater in seinem Urlaub um 5 Uhr aufsteht.
Wenn er wie jeder den Dienst für für seine Familie antritt.
Wenn er die Pool-Landschaft der Normandie gleich erstürmt.
Wenn er die Fahne schwenkend Gebiet markiert.
Er und 500 andere.

Es ist Krieg, wenn sie auf die Rabatte zustürmt.
Wenn sie den bewaffneten Konflikt mit ihren Freundinnen sucht.
Wenn sie Ressourcen erbeutet, die sie nicht braucht.
Wenn sie zusätzlich zu ihrem neuen Sommerrock auch aufgeschlürfte Knie mit nach Hause nimmt.
Sie und 500 andere.

Es ist Krieg, wenn wir Menschen den Kopf verlieren.
Wir und alle anderen.)

:bulletred:My english sucks, so if you find some grammar mistakes, or i write a word wrong, please let me know.

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GraphiteSTALKER Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice poem, I must say. However, about war in general, I must quote one person of the DA community:

"As long as free mind exists, there will always be different interests. Confronting interests invariably lead to conflicts. Therefore, as long as sapient life exists, there will always be war." Quite sad, but chillingly true.
GeckiGewaldro Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
thank you very much :)
GraphiteSTALKER Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
EvilMadness2010 Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GeckiGewaldro Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
thank you^^ the grammar is a little bit crazy ^^' but i have the correction and want to try to uploaded it :)
EvilMadness2010 Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GeckiGewaldro Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
EvilMadness2010 Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DarkneseOfNightmares May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just for spelling, the word 'holydays' is incorrect. It's actually 'holidays'.

Other than that, I think this is actually a nice poem :)
GeckiGewaldro May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
thank you very much :)
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